Your poems are mostly 4 lines. It take an educated person to decode the meaning unless you lengthen to more lines to describe. Sometimes I can not easily see the picture in your poem.You are too sophisticated. It seems that you are from the mainland,not the island. I have tried to write a few lines for kicks.My words are simple for the rank and file not the elites.
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Your poems are mostly 4 lines.
It take an educated person to decode the meaning unless you lengthen to more lines to describe.
Sometimes I can not easily see the picture in your poem.You are too
sophisticated.
It seems that you are from the mainland,not the island.
I have tried to write a few lines for kicks.My words are simple for the rank and file not the elites.
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