2007年3月24日星期六

古今洋我


古为今用,洋为我用

蟹文纵横蓝天水
方块上下黄土田
龙腾虎跃今朝看
古往今来换人间

2006-10-08

1 条评论:

匿名 说...

Your poems are mostly 4 lines.
It take an educated person to decode the meaning unless you lengthen to more lines to describe.
Sometimes I can not easily see the picture in your poem.You are too
sophisticated.
It seems that you are from the mainland,not the island.
I have tried to write a few lines for kicks.My words are simple for the rank and file not the elites.